Monday 20 January 2014

as part of the writing course

We had to write a poem based on true history.  I chose the opening of the Forth Road Bridge.  The outcome of the research is this piece of work.

The Opening of

the Forth Road Bridge


With thirty one thousand miles of wire,
And thirty nine thousand tons of steel,
Seven workers’ lives which were stolen,
Never meant to be part of the deal.

A bridge, spanning two thousand metres,
Crosses over the Firth of the Forth
And takes us from, the Queensferry South,
To the Queensferry here, in the North.

The ferryboats needed no longer,
Over eight hundred years they have ran
Now traffic can cross over water,
On this wonder designed by a man.

People who worked on the ferry boats
Now collecting the money we pay
No longer for 18 pounds a week
But two pounds and 10 shillings per day

Constructing the bridge is completed
The painting of it just about done.
Those tons of metal are glistening
In the light of the September sun

Our queen and her husband are crossing
The bridge, while the crowd shouts, waves and cheers.
This moment people have waited for
Has arrived, after twenty one years.



Underneath in the river’s waters,
Naval ships wait to join in the fun,
From today there’s a brand new era,
To be marked by them firing a gun.

With their flags and their pretty dresses,
Little girls in the crowd curtsey down.
The boys in their suits, all smart and clean
Get told off for just acting the clown.

The main celebrations are over
This event went according to plan
All the people are travelling home
In most every transport they can

Memories are all that are left here,
Heavy traffic runs daily each way.
Children, now adults, are telling kids,
Of one very spectacular day.


Freda Brodie

November 2008

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